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An important question to native English speakers

Journal Entry: Thu May 29, 2014, 10:06 AM
Hi everyone,

I am having a terrible problem (well, it is not the only problem I am having lately)  with writing dialogues, I mean handwritten (!!!!!!!!) stuff only.

For instance, take a look at:

"Hello, Mary," Jeffrey stammered.

"Hi, Jeffrey, how are you?"

"Uh, fine. What have you been doing lately?"

I understand the placement of commas etc. but heeeey should I make it line under a line? Or just put everything together: Blah blah "Hello, Mary," Jeffrey stammered. "Hi, Jeffrey, how are you?" blah blah ? Could you share your experience of  writing essays or fiction?



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Ann/齐玉玲
Artist | Hobbyist | Digital Art
Poland
„Więc kimże w końcu jesteś?-Jam częścią tej siły, która wiecznie zła pragnąc, wiecznie czyni dobro”

22y.old not so girly girl
studying english and chinese on 西里西亚大学
main dreams and plans are: manage to finish studies; be with my beloved one; keep in touch with friends; visit loads of cool places; meet intelligent and nice people; have fine job; draw and create more; own a cool '70 american car

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InkScaled Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Wszystkiego najlepszego Have your cake and eat it too c:
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Scarlet-Fog Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dziękujęęęę <3!
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Legrandzilla Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Happy birthday Ann! :hug::iconhappybirthdaycakeplz:
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Scarlet-Fog Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! :*
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Sunrise-LoneWolf Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Happy Birthday!! :la:
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Scarlet-Fog Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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Sunrise-LoneWolf Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :)
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PutYourBraveFaceOn Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Happy Birthday! :)
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Scarlet-Fog Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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tessieart333 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Wishing you a very Happy Birthday and may this year bring you everything you hope and dream of and remember anything is possible:-)

_Tessie
Visual Artist & Illustrator & Musician~
<3Airborne 
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